Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response

WWW: You did attempt to produce a preliminary project with some attempt at planning evidenced on your blog too. Which means you now have some experience of editing.

EBI: The production and the brief do not meet the preliminary exercise expectations. This is a good lesson to ensure you understand the brief and the minimum requirements so that you can gain the maximum marks available.

 As your learner response, write what you are planning to make for your real coursework. Will you choose to make the 2 video adverts or 3 print adverts? Explain your decision.

2 videos because I've already made a plan and have started to record and edit it 

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